Comments : Ashes to ashes

  • 8 years ago

    by Hope

    awesome poem, I feel what is said with every spaced word.

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Hope.

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhh damn...Love the dark side!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Hey Andrea.

      Me too! Especially when some are relieved relief ha!x

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    This feiry frenzy soon fizzles
    to smouldering, weepy
    drizzles.

    See how you use similar sound sound to convey feeling. It is beautiful.

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Frank.

      Words are lovely :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Nice ink Michael.
    PPx

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Paul :)

      Your words mean a lot chap

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved the use of words and visuals x

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Milly :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Wow Michael! Another amazing write!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ren,

      Kind words as always :)