I bet it all on love and lost on a straight flush
And the Only thing left was my heart crushed...

^^

I love the power in these last two lines and the write as a whole is sad, but honestly told and well written.

Take care,

Ben

Nice piece of writing Fredy

Powerful and emotional

all the best

Michael :)

Like Michael said, this is a very powerful and emotional write, with flawless rhyming and a smooth flow. Well done!!

Great use of license with "again" and "pretend," I wouldn't have thought of that.