Comments : I will not give in

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Yes! This is such an inspiring write!! When we get knocked down, we just gotta stand back up and keep putting one foot in front of the other! You got this! Excellent write and much love and peace to you!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful write.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Ok I split it abit wrong lol but hey ho...

    N, firstly I am glad to see you writing again even if it's a little sad in places but I do feel the determination within this piece which is fantastic.

    1&2 Yes yes yes!! Determination and will power is the key here and I feel you have both. Loving the way you write and I truly believe they will not win and we all have testing times, some more than others but we (and you) will get through them.

    3/ I'm glad you take these things on the chin etc, live is never easy and I know you haven't had it easy either but it makes you stronger and some times thick skin is all we need.

    4/ as I have said before we all have our weaknesses of which we find it difficult to comprehend them but we do, sometimes all we need is time and love!!! O and alot of patience !!

    5/ This is one of my fave parts. If we apologised for each time we failed I would be constantly saying sorry but I agree we arent guinea pigs.

    6/ You will! I have faith in you, if I can do it anyone can

    7/ that ending brought me to tears !!

    Love you!!

    Em

    Edit: sings, you can. Knock me down but I'll get back up again (from the trolls lol)

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Em for reading and the comment. I didnt mean to make you cry !!

      And ps. I havent seen trolls :(