Comments : Adieu.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    WOW. I am speechless with this

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A heart rendering poem which has endured much pain and is
    still tagging along with it, perhaps unable to put it to rest or maybe thinking
    let it be an acknowledgement to those who found it a burden...maybe I'm wrong
    but this is such a painful write...take care

    Welcome to the site :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    A warm welcome! This is really a raw honest write, thank you for sharing, loved it. I look forward to reading more from you.

  • 3 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Welcome to the site, and what a grand entrance, I must say! WOW is the right word. This is a breathtaking, stunning, heart-melting piece. Excellent!

  • 3 years ago

    by gopi nath

    simple and best

  • 3 years ago

    by Milo

    The whole it burns through me. Great line to end the poem. Tangled in love, regardless if he or she loves you back, is a powerful write and I like it.

    • 3 years ago

      by Sai

      Thank you! And to everyone else who left such kind words.

  • 2 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.