Comments : Moonbeams in a Jar

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Dear Lady!!! OH- be still my heart!! This is GORGEOUS!! I had butterflies the entire time and my skin is still covered in goosebumps!! WOW!! Absolutely fantastic AMAZING job!! I am so impressed! I wish I could nominate this now!!! Love it!!!

    (<3) ^ love button has been clicked!!

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Oh, dear Cowgirl! I'm am very touched by your comment! Thank you!

    • 6 years ago

      by Alec

      Honestly, she had me at the title.
      (<3)

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you, Alec! That means a lot!

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Flabbergasted!!!

    This is an outstanding piece of beauty :)
    I take a bow Miss ML X

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you, Michael, firstly for the inspiration from your own lovely verses. Your genius is very much acknowledged. And thank you for the comment as well.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    It's an awesome poem. I like the choice of simple words and phrases that you used to express what you feel. Real good job here.

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you Dib, Brenda, and Duchess!

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Awww, this is just beautiful! Such pure love in this write-well done-

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Breathtakingly beautiful !!! Xxx

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A beautiful and sincere piece of writing; pure poetry!

    All the best to you,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      A lovely comment Ben. Thank you.

  • 6 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Miracles happen on paper. Amazing how little words charm. If I were this Prince Charming here; then, no doubts you make my 'goddess!'

    Awesome blend of creativity! So sweetly worded all the way! Keep inking and don't stop thinking!

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      A wonderful and sweet comment, Marv. Thank you!

  • 6 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    What a wonderful scene in its simplicity and yet so profound. The ageless protestations of love are captured in a glaze of magic light, refreshed and vulnerable.
    One might complain for the lack of her reply but you have assured us of her willing acceptance: "she says yes ... with head bowed ... to hide a burn that creeps through her beautiful cheeks."
    Well deserving of the front page.

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Larry, to read such a comment from you made me really happy! Thank you for the sincere appreciation!

  • 6 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Uhhhgggg this piece almost plucked all my arms hair... lol...goosebumps. ..you have a brilliant mind ....I love it

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you, Angel. :-)

    • 6 years ago

      by PETER EDWARDS

      Such beautiful words here, stunning with great description and imagery in every line.
      I simply loved this piece!!