Comments : Sweet dreams

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Creatively delicious...left me dreamy...

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Miss M :)
      Actually helped a little to get a bit of sleep

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    who doesnt love a good sweet!! however being me, my mind went to the gutter! Sorry !!!
    a fondant fountain spraying
    fresh whipped double cream
    I lay upon a strawberry patch

    ^^^^
    This part in particular ;)

    Love this poem though xx keep it up!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks DD
      Haha, well in honesty until your comments I really was so far away from what I think your thinking, but yes I see.

      However that is your perspective and not mine which is quite funny and what poetry is all about :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, such a "sweet" write-it definitely caters to my sweet tooth. Very creative!

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Brenda :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This was all sweet and innocent until I read n's comment lol!!!

    Loved it but I think I've put about 5 stone on just by reading this hahaha

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Sorry Em!!! Haha dirty mind today!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      You girls! I thought it was men majority who look for the naughtiness in their minds hahaha

      Thanks Em, I'm just keeping this 'sweet' :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Em

      Michael I think is women are worse lol