Awww! Y'all! This turned out so beautifully!! WELL DONE! :)

I'm seriously loving all of the collaborations Im seeing these days!

Shamazeballs!!

Nice collaboration the guys, and what I sense from this piece, that there is a nice link between two, in regard to the verses

Michael :)

yay this was fun to write :D My parts are terrible tho :P

The collaboration of styles is very similar throughout most of this tantalizing flight. The initial theme has a gentle waft which painted me a soft butterfly type Hummingbird only to be clipped mid poem with a harsher tone of a bird, stripped of feathers? An interesting read well done guys!

Intoxicated in flutter while dancing with the winds made
me think of someone happily dancing intoxicated maybe even
with wine glass in hand.

Second stanza - carried this through but gave a romantic
slant. I like to think that someone engrossed on the
setting sun has romance in thier heart.

Third stanza - Candles fading in her presence links in well
giving the impression of glowing happiness more brighter than
candles. Blowing them out implies a required intimacy

Fourth stanza - I can still imagine our heroine dancing around
in the moon light

Fifth stanza - Perhaps her heroine is journeying to see her
loved one as she finds smiles in the stars and the soft touch
of the nights winds

Next three stanzas shows her struggle against the winds and
it becomes apparent that her struggle to stay upbeat and intact
is not just during her nights journey but pertenant to her
every day life.

The last stanza - heading towards unknown possibilities only
knowing that I am called to fly is a superb finale
all in all a wonderful portrayal of a strong happy
spirit happily heading out on a journey that will challenge her in more
ways than she knows.

Well done you two on a great collaboration

Beautifully done, guys. Delicately written with some lovely alliteration too.
Collaborations are rarely easy but this one is seamless.

All the very best,

Ben

I agree with Ben - this is a beautiful piece - I can visualise it in my mind. Well done both.

Sounds like you are an angel flying far away to an unknown destination. The quality of feelings and wordings you have put in this is quite marvelous. I liked your journey throughout this poem.

I'm sorry I don't have a title for nominating poems, otherwise I would have sent this poem forward straight away.

Well done on this.

Such a beautiful write. Honestly, I could see the images unfolding in front of my eye of imagination.
Great work , as always. Added to my favourites:)

This captures the moments of flight amazingly well. Almost as though the authors wanted to be such a bird, or have had a journey alike this one... Lovely Murphy and Mel

Beautiful piece, connected to nature, and human resilience as well, as i can sense through lines. i can relate to that humming bird , as all poets can, as that bird is called to fly, we too are called to sing through our words.