Great rhyming, Tasha. Mute monster is a brilliant characterization of your emotions deep inside. A beautiful sad poem.

Loved the rhyming and the emotions of this piece well done

Awesome and I can relate to each word

Fantastic and all too relatable for me

A wonderfully interesting piece. I loved the sentiment and content. Delightfully written, too. Also, an amazing title. Love it.

I really like this poem. To me, it sounds more like a short song, but it's dark and chilling. I don't comment often, but I had to here. The last 2 lines were the best to me. Very well written :)