Dear Cowgirl! This is a simply beautiful write! I mean, really, really beautiful write! And my, your words are like a slap in my face...because I have been there with the much-needed distraction. Michael is going to dance for you. I can distract you too. Hehe. So please, cheer up. :-)
My sweet Dear Lady- Thank you so much for your beautiful and kind words! You are so sweet! I appreciate you so much!! Now we can both sit back and enjoy Michael doing the chicken dance for us ;)
Thank you so much, again, it means a lot. <3
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
An effective piece, helped not least by the breathless layout.
This is how I feel when I don't have coffee. It's also how I feel when I stupidly end up having coffee at night because I couldn't in the morning. I've been looking for distractions for hours now but I've ran out of things to do. So I'm sitting in my room, buzzing on caffeine and looking for paperclips to play with until it wears off. I know it's not what the poem was intended to mean or be about, and I apologise if what I said seems like a joke, but it just fit my mood so well when I read it. The layout even suits my breathing. It's even worse when old unwanted memories creep in and linger.
Lol, Maher! This comment is awesome. And so fitting. And you thought I sounded like I was jumping around in text?! This is priceless. I understand those caffeine buzzes. Hope you found enough paperclips lol. But you're right, the old memories are the worse. Thank you for reading and the comment Dude!! I appreciate it :)
Put earbuds in and your favorite playlist on repeat. Let your mind wander adrift on the sweet soundwaves as your fears recede with the shores of the corporeal; ride the current to good dreams. I'll be waiting cowgirl. Ready for a dance to chords of colors swirling around us, subtitled with rhyming words of poetry.