by Michael
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Miss Shakespeare is that what thy shall refer thee to? :) |
by Michael
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...And well done on a ton! my dear :) |
by mossgirl19
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Thank you, dear Englishman. :-) Yay. Glad you enjoyed the piece. |
by gopi nath
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century wow keep heading.... |
by mossgirl19
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Thanks a lot, Gopi! |
by Em
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All I can say to this is I truly hope it's nominated, it's one of your best. Lovely rhyming, story and sentiment !! |
by mossgirl19
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That is very sweet, Em! No need for nomination really, this is all about my dream of coming to England. And glad that you liked it! |
by Ben Pickard
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This is superb, Mel, and shows a real knowledge of literature. |
by mossgirl19
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Thank you, Ben. Your lovely words are appreciated. :-) I love them too and especially Sherlock Holmes. |
by Ren
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Gorgeous write, Dear Lady! Absolutely love it! And congrats on your 100th poem! AMAZING! <3 |
by mossgirl19
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Thank you, Dear Cowgirl! Much love to you. :-) |
by Maher
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This was a VERY pleasant read! It's like something out of a book and the novel references in there make it all the more interesting. The imagery is good and the character is quite lovable. It starts by telling you it's a dream, but by the time you're mid-way through, you forget that as you're taken on this journey. You're then reminded of it being a dream again. You've played that quite well, whether intentional or not, being that we humans like to make the ideal a reality and vise versa. That stuck out to me quite a bit and I think it worked well. |
by mossgirl19
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Thank you, Maher! Yes, I have to end it by reminding myself it's a dream.haha :-) |
by RustySoul
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Oh my! What a wonderful piece!! The poem brought out images vividly before my eyes, it gave a feel as if I'm in England. Usage of old words like doth and hath suits the purpose. Fantabulous. |
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Great insight |
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An absolutely beautiful poem. The use of tradition English lifts this already spell-bounding piece even higher. The use of the English language is wonderful, as you stretch the vocabulary, within a beautifully seamless flow. I enjoyed it thoroughly, and am adding it to my favourites. |
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Love it |
by ddavidd
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Wow. I knew you were a lady of substance, and this damn piece proves that %100. |
by words2myself
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I love this poem. |
by Mr. Darcy
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A milestone marked with a dreamy tribute to some of England's treasures. |