Comments : Nightmare (acrostic)

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    What a nightmare of a poem. It's bloody fantastic...your word choices are making my nose bleed...:-) And horrific images. It's a great write, Michael!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Oh dear...wake up quick :)

      Thank you Miss M lovely words as ever :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Clever stuff Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em,

      That's what nightmares do for me haha

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very clever write, Michael. There is a danger with acrostics to 'coast' if you know my meaning. It takes real work to write a good acrostic and this really is one.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben

      ..and yes I know exactly what you say, an acrostic could end up a short story :)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    What a brilliant poem Michael !!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Nams, lovely words they are

      Michael :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Awesome awesome awesome, Michael!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Bless you Ren
      lovely comments :)