Angela,

Such a lovely rhyming piece, and the Samurai sword a wonderful metaphor
really enjoyed reading your poem
well done I say :)

Michael x

All I'm going to say is we my outgrow our mothers laps but definitely not their hearts.

Em

All I will say is that I understand this poem entirely.

Thank you everyone for your kind comments - I wanted to edit 'sun' in the first line for 'moon' - can't seem to find out how to!

Beautifully written piece. I think that moon works just as well as sun because the fourth line ends with 'soon' so works either with sun or moon. x