What a comeback, Michael and please take me to this beautiful treat! How magical was the trip that I hope to repeat reading this once more, just for the feels of it. This did not only make me smile, but I floated somewhere. Just what a piece of beautiful poetry does. :-)
Oh Miss M...well never stop wishing for your treats in life, and even if they are never granted. We have the miracles of our imagination :)
Thank you for lovely warm words as ever :)
4 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Michael, you know how I love a sonnet and this one is excellent. They are so difficult to get right. This has the three quatrains and required couplet, the correct rhyme scheme and ten syllables per line, so well done indeed.
If Mel Liz gets to go, I wanna go, too! What a magical and awe-inspiring write, Michael! An excellent read right before I try and close my eyes finally for a few hours of rest. Thank you for the amazing visuals- hoping for some interesting dreams! Really though, amazing writing, as always! Truly enjoyed reading this beautiful write :)