Comments : A TALE OF THE CLOUDS

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is very cool, Ken! I love the story very much especially how it started, like the idea of clouds 'puffing' haha. One more poem that overflows with your humor and creativity! You always nail the fun!

    • 8 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Mel!

    • 8 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Sorry, for some reason my comment got duplicated!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Another great write, Ken. Very good.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Ben, I'm trying to keep up with you, a great one!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I love the imagery in this poem. I love it when nature is pictured through a story. The ending is very optimistic too. Makes my heart flutter. <3

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Your insight is a blessing Zahra!