What's more powerful than free will? The unconscious. This is a vivid imagination of what I would like to fall asleep to in the dark as I transition to the dream world. Great descriptive write. Witness fireflies before my dreamlike eyes...

Chandi, this is very beautiful! Made me feel like I'm inside a dream. Simply breathtaking. This is excellent and it's my pleasure to nominate this.

to feel at peace as you fall asleep is just one thing I reckon we all want but never completely get. Great work

Thankyou so much everyone for your amazing feedbacks
thanks for reading, i truly appreciate :)

Some truly wonderful descriptive writing in this poem. Beautifully written.

All the very best

This is just lovely. Your visuals just flow beautifully. Well done-

Thanks Brenda and Ben
glad you liked it:)

LOVE this! Well done!!!

Your way of expressing words is just truly amazing. :)

Yey! Congrats, Chandi! Great job!

Congratulations on your win chandelier :)

Michael

Could have sworn I had commented on this but obviously not... This is fantastically done and congratulations on your win

Congratulations on your front page win!

Congrats on the win!! :)

Fantastically done. you just wowed me

I keep rereading this poem. I don't oversell my praises or get caught up with a particular poem often, but I'm still delighted and mesmerized by this write.

I keep rereading this poem. I don't oversell my praises or get caught up with a particular poem often, but I'm still delighted and mesmerized by this write. It's been a long time this has happened

Judges comments

"When everyone's asleep" By chandelier 7 points

I badly wanted to hit the favorite button on this unfortunately I must refrain .

Being a judge on here it not easy, there are so many precious things that capture ones heart and mind. So I'll avoid that button for now and revisit it at a later date.

The thing about sleep is "we need it: we can't survive without it and yet many many members of the community have very little.

It's not healthy, but sometimes it is a catalyst for works of genius and art.

This poem I consider to be one of such.

Well done (7)