Comments : Writer’s Block

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved it. Writers block is certainly not stemming your creativity x

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thanks for saying that, Milly. It's really not cool I swear!

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    for someone with writer's block this is actually a very raw and real piece with a lot of incredible word choice as well. The flow isn't terrible like mine gets when I've got writers block and the style isn't god awful either lol.

    Decently penned for a blockage write!

    P.s. PM me if you'd like some advice to get over writer's block!

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thanks, Madison and I really appreciate what you shared with me. :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Mel, for writers block this is definitely pretty cool so don't say it isn't lol. You have a good flow, beat and rhythm usually my 'writers block' doesn't allow me to write anything let alone something so astounding.

    Ok so definition of writers block first and foremost: the condition of being unable to think of what to write or how to proceed with writing - well you most certainly may have this but when it makes a lovely written piece like this I wish I was suffering too haha

    1/ Well it seems that everything including ink and people have to come to an end unfortunately.. I think

    2/ Love the imagery of love failing to exist and angels and demons crying in unity because of you predicament of your ink running dry.

    3/4 These lines were my favourite. The imagery of 'eternal damnation' beginning because of your world lacking/being free from words is pretty powerful as in my opinion it represents how much your poetry means to you or have I read too far between the lines lol.

    Fantastic
    Em

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Dear Duchess,

      I am suffering indeed and I am becoming very lonely (desperate is the right term I guess). I don't know that this appears astounding but I wrote this as my heart feels so...you are absolutely right poetry means so much to me! You are as brilliant as ever in breaking this down in pieces! You just made my day with this lovely (and fun, lol) comment, thank you!

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    When you can not write
    It is not writers block
    Writers block is just a myth

    You can not writ because you have nothing to say
    Or inspiration
    Is hesitant to chose you farther

    It means
    Your tanks,
    Your hives of words
    Are empty,
    It means that your bees
    must go back to the filed of experience
    to smell some splendour
    to gather
    some honey

    Poetry is epiphany
    if for good
    you can not prophesise any farther,
    your prophecy
    is over.

    ( I know that hardly would ever happen to you)

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Oh dear Frank, with this I think I can write something now...thanks for the time in leaving such a lovely message.

    • 6 years ago

      by ddavidd

      You know THAT I LOVE YOU, FOR THE REASON OF YOUR RAW TALENT

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    'Genius delight' my dear Miss M :)

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Isn't it ironic, Michael? Haha. Thanks.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Dearest Lady :) This is some fan-freaking-tastic writing for someone with WB! Of course, no matter what, I am still one of your biggest fans!! Seriously though, this is another excellent piece by you! Short, raw, powerful, and very well written! Well done, hon! <3

  • 6 years ago

    by Artdistree

    Powerful words and deep. What is WB?

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi MG,

    WB can be awful, I am also having one because life is just too busy!

    I like this rhyming verse, I too feel poetry is needed to portray the deepest and most profound meaning of life as also the more common feelings we have as humans. Nothing like a good verse to make you go "a- haaaa" :-)

    Well done, all the best

    Ingrid
    ps: Thank you for your kind comments!

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Ms. Ingrid, so glad to hear from you! Thank you!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    I ran out of words lot of times, but it didn't last forever.
    This is my favorite stanza.

    On that day, true love will cease to exist
    And angels and demons will both cry

    I think it's too short, you should have added atleast one more stanza. But the poem is still a stunning piece.