Comments : Awake

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love this Cowgirl. A strong piece, and I can relate in one way or another to the writer...sometimes we just need something to keep us going...to feel something than nothing at all...awww, I resonated with this very much. And this is wonderfully rhymed with an absorbing rhythm. Really great write and another favorite of mine from you. Much love always!

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Dear sweet Lady! Your comments are always so lovely and warm my heart. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave such kind and loving words. You are so sweet! Much love to you, as well <3

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Ren,

    'I need the fire, to know I'm awake' very powerful verse, as long as you don't burn up!
    Really deep piece which says a lot at the moment.
    and a great read.

    Hope all is well

    Much love and warmth

    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Michael, thank you so much for your awesome comment! I always appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work, and for the love and warmth :)
      As always, right back 'atcha. Thank you once again!

  • 8 years ago

    by Phil

    Cause I’d rather feel somethin’
    Than nothin’ at all-
    I long for the thrill
    To cushion the fall
    ^^^

    This here is goldust!

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Phil!! I truly appreciate it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ren, your work seems to get better and better with every write.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Ben! I really appreciate it!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I have no words for this without duplicating everyone else's comments but it's powerful stuff Ren as always.
    Em x

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Sweet Em, thank you so very much! <3

  • 8 years ago

    by nani

    This gave me chills! I think I read it 6 times before I responded. This is just flat out amazing Ren!! Like Ben said, your writing just seems to get better and better.

    Nani :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Aww wow thank you so much lovebug!! I appreciate it!! <3

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, what a write! Powerful, raw, full of emotions. You go girl! Love this-

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so so much Brenda!! You're awesome! I appreciate it!

  • 8 years ago

    by WritingtheStars

    I love the flow to this piece. And you captured the emotions so perfectly, I could feel it.
    Wonderful write.

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Much appreciated!

  • 8 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    I need the fire to know I'm awake.....

    That ending was so amazing

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!