Nice poems, keep it up!! Ciao xoxo

Beautiful poem as always. You are so talented. I could feel the pain throughout the poem, even though i have never faced such a situation. i really love the words you use to write poems.. I wish i could also have such word power. As a poet, you are a real inspiration.

It was an outstanding poem, couldn't have said it better myself. I've been there before, keep up the good work.

one word: WOW! am i suprised? no because it was written by you. ue talent amazes me with each poem you write

that was absolutely perfect, theres no other word for it, it just screams perfection, i felt when i was reading it, as though it was about me, because this has happened to me time and time again, i love that you can understand it when you are not the one in that position, you have such amazing talent, you are so great!!!

Great poem, I've seen this story played out a few times and you seem to portray it perfectly.

Wow, you did a great job of putting yourself in a womans shoes. Brilliant poem xx

This poem was very nice, I love how you write, your wording is excellant and I really enjoyed your poem...I hope to look at more...LiL One

Great poem just like the rest of your poems. I know exactly what the poem is talking about cuz I went through it for the first time with a guy I really had strong feelings for. If you ever want to talk my email is smart1_2007@yahoo.com.

Wow!!! that's all I can say. Thanx for writing it, that applies to me to. You are wonderful with your words, and the flow, and everything! That was an amazing poem, you have great talent!!! Don't ever stop writing!
*luvs*
Sierra

Great poem, Brandon. You did an excellent job of presenting a woman's point of view... I bet you are a terrific friend!

Another poem that has been stolen of yours.http://www.trinipulse.com/community/member_tp.asp?id=lanos145&pageNumber=7

Wow that is all i can say .

I really liked that poem i can relate to it.

Wow, incredible.
Keep it up.