Comments : Lost without you...(English sonnet)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    ' This is taken from a previous poem of mine, edited and now a sonnet, which was my original intention, so I'm happy now'

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Yes. Missing Moon if I am not mistaken...lol...I remember so much poems in my head!

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I miss the sparkle of the moon too...sometimes I stare at it and it's just plain and no drizzle of love...I try to get inspiration from it to be able to write but it seems angry with me...haha. What did I ever do to you, Moon. haha.

    I share the sentiment. A sweet, beautiful sonnet! Great job, Michael.

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M, for your lovely comments
      The moon isn't angry with you, but maybe something is just missing for you at the moment, which I'm sure you will find.

      Much love and warmth

      Michael x

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    OH MY!!! I am in awe, Mr. Michael!! This is just absolutely beautiful! From someone who loves the night and the moon dearly, this is a gorgeous piece that touches a special place in my heart. Amazing job! <3

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Ren,

      Your comments always carry a wave of inspiration, and words that mean so much

      Much love

      Michael x :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, this is excellent. Perhaps we can write a sonnet together sometime?

    All the best as ever

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      ^^
      YES!!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Yay, and about love? I would die! :-)

    • 8 years ago

      by Em

      Indeed I think you should!! <3

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank yo Ben :)
      I will take that as a compliment, and yes a great idea, I would enjoy that definately

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    You've done it again... You've blown me away or is it the wind here lol :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em, lovely words as always :)
      As long as its not wind of the irritable kind haha!

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written sonnet. I love the theme of moon and the emotional splendour. Well done x

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly
      for your lovely words :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhhh look at this beautiful poem!!!!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Andrea, such a way with words in your comments :)x

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, what a lovely sonnet! This is so beautiful, love the story line-

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda, lovely words as always :)