Comments : Love me then leave me

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    OMG, Plur! This is awesome! Great rhyming and good flow. I feel like the writer has accepted the sad reality that she is always left by the one she loves maybe because she has been there a lot of times. And the phrase 'just love me then leave me'... it reads like 'I know you will fool me and hurt me but I will still let you do it'.

    Ti's a really great job, Plur!

    • 6 years ago

      by beyouplur

      Thank you so much!!!:))

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    This write is cool as hell. The pace is positively manic. Well done-

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is fantastic

  • 6 years ago

    by beyouplur

    Tysm:)))))

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Fantastic write!! Well done!! Love this!

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney


    Judges comments

    "Love Me Then Leave Me" By beyouplur 7 points

    I thought I had made up my mind on this week's nominations and then I came across this at the last minute which caused me to re-evaluate my choices..

    This is a really strong piece that I think will resonate with many. It is never good to be in such a relationship like this but for so many this is simply the way of things.

    To put it out there for all to see is brave and commendable. The poem itself is incredibly well written and captivating with amazing visuals.

    Really enjoyed this (7)