by mossgirl19
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This is an awesome honest write. The rhymes flowed out so well. The message is heart-breaking...I can read the hurt and confusion in the lines. And that question is truly difficult to answer! |
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thank you so much dear |
by Em
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I agree with MG Though I was a little put off with the caps lock |
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sorry about the caps |
by Ben Pickard
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I have to be honest, after going through these things, you certainly have a right to question the good of having a heart at all. I suppose you have to try and take the positives from negative experiences if that makes sense. You have two children, if this is literal, and you will be a stronger person when you come out the other side. |
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thank you very much means alot |
by CJ Maleney
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As a guy who writes a lot of rhymes I absolutely love this, it's just a shame about the content. And as for the last verse. |
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y thank you :* |
by MoonMaiden
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Okay.. This is going to the favs ! I loved how easy it was to read because it flowed so well. Also, the depths of the hurt and confusion and frustration you felt must not go unnoticed. A dam fool he is, i say ! Lol. Keep writing girl |
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thank you for your kind words i appreciate it means alot |
by Marvellous
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It's natural to misquote cost. Till scarcity, value is lost. Pain comes to widen reasoning. All that happens tend towards win. After sales, bookkeeping follows. |