Comments : Motherhood (live write excuse errors )

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I think we can all take something from this Craig

    • 8 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I so misjudged her, she now has my upmost respect.

      As for the poem itself I'm really not happy with a couple of verses but it was a live write so can't change it

      Thanks for your comment em x

  • 8 years ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Really like this xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Strong write Craig. It's never easy when you are presented with a surprise like this. Some people rise to the occasion, others sink.

    • 8 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Yeah she's stronger than I thought especially when the farther of the child seems to be distancing himself.