Comments : Only you...

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Andrea x :)

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Breathtaking and beautiful, Michael.

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M.
      Lovely words as ever :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Awwww Michael, this is so sweet! Just love it!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I was thinking about the layout of this poem. The way you
    have broken up the lines leaving behind it dots of trails...
    this felt as if the writer has many feelings and thoughts and whilst
    thinking penning these emotions down. The passion surly is alive
    within the lines and it grabs me as a reader because of its slow and
    sensual pace...lovely!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Meena,
      For your lovely words, and your emotions reading my poem. Yes you are right, that whilst writing, the dots were moments of thought..