spring

by Stefanos Stavrianos   Aug 7, 2017


Do you like spring?
The nature are being
very beautiful
Trees are green
like your eyes...
and the sea is blue
and play with the sun's colour
Mmm....
Maybe this is the colour of Heaven......

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  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    What a lovely write! Such a lovely tribute to your special someone-well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I must admit, at first read it felt somewhat unfinished, and underthought. But on a second and third read I saw a blissful joy in it's simplicity.

    This may've been intentional, but I think - grammatically speaking - the 'are' in the sixth line should've been 'is'.