Comments : Forgotten Vow

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is really powerful

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As Em says, a powerful and honest write, Naomi, which I have come to expect from you.
    I hope you are okay.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Nams, I have read all three of your new posts and I am so intrigued. This one is just so full-packed and a real honest write!

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Hey Nams

    This is a very hard-hitting write, raw to say the least. You have expressed your feeling and emotions so openly and honest. Such admiration for you, as this takes strength also :)

    Never stop feeling that something is not achievable, it can take many times before you/we all get there. It really comes down to managing ourselves, with who we are and what our vulnerabilities are open to. But we have to want it so, so much :)

    Sending love and warmth

    Michael x

  • 6 years ago

    by Maher

    Most everyone here has already made similar comments to this poem that I would have - that being that it's great. So I'll just say this one thing:

    You're only human USB. I'm sure you catch my drift.