This is extremely powerful !!

I agree with Em, a lot of power in this write. Well done-

I have to be boring and agree with the other comments! Very powerful, I love the metaphors.

I don't want to sound like a broken record...but this
this is just so emotionally charged yet the way its penned
as a reader I can feel the simmering emotions behind them
which has been penned here with such calm..lovely!

Pat, great to read new stuff from you...you just slayed it again. Seamless and flowed very well.

Holy crap. Favoriting this one.

Yup... this is good stuff

Can you dedicate a poem to me?

Somehow this question isn't leaving my head: How does yesterday create your future?