Comments : Giving Up

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Great rhyming Mandy...exposing your hearts fears and doubts mustn't have been easy. Well written!

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you, Mark. You guys always being supportive and commenting makes things easier and I appreciate your comments :D

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely fantastic rhyming. I have to say it again though story of my life - letting men (I use the term lightly) know the real me for them to turn out to be idiots in tinfoil haha!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you, Em! Yeah, I'm a sucker :D

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Mandy, so very true. It's not easy when this happens time and time again. You did an awesome job with this, your rhymes are spot on and flows beautifully. Well done-

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you, Brenda! You guys are all so nice and complimentary, I really do appreciate the feedback :D

  • 8 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Mandy, everything about poem is good: the flow, rhyme, the emotions.
    It's not easy to put together a shattered heart just to see it shatters once again.
    I hope and pray you find true love soon.

    And it's good to see it in the nomination list.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you so much! I think this is my first nomination, wow. Yeah it takes alot to put your hand back in the fire. I appreciate the comment!

    • 8 years ago

      by Lucifer

      My best wishes are with you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Mandy,
    such a wonderful rhyming piece, full of emotion in the on-going battles of life, really well put together

    Well done

    Much love
    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you, Michael :"D

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Fantastic poem, and I think many of us have been there

    Take care

    Craig

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you Craig :D

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Another brilliant write Mandy, so worthy of a nomination.

    Promising he's different
    Soothing, "Shhh, relax."

    Ooh that bit really resonated ... been there too many times.
    So, so good!
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you! I'm sad you've been there, but I greatly appreciate your comments :D

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Mandy, this is one fantastic piece and I am so gripped from start to end. Flawless rhyming too. Loved it.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mandy

      Thank you! You're always so nice about my writing, I greatly appreciate it :D