Hello Saundarya... First of all a warm welcome to the site! This piece is very inspiring... I love its structure and rhyming too. I think at the last line there should be an 'at' say, 'it is at your worst time that you must not quit, although it read okay as it is. :-)

Loved this beautifully rhymed piece.

I so so get the message in this

Well done

Craig