Comments : Smashing

  • 8 years ago

    by Mini

    Ahh!! Epic :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Ah thank you Mini :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Lucifer

    I think I am lucky to read such beautiful poems written by you.

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank Mr L

      that is a really nice compliment :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mandy

    Gorgeous!

    -Mandy

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mandy :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Amazing written. I can feel the love. Be blessed

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar bless you too :)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Well done michael. Lucky lady..

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks nams
      Just a nostalgic write of first love :)

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the rhythm and pace of this. I felt how quickly everything occurred and it actually made me feel like i was in a collision of some sort - but much more intact than an accident of any kind. The wording here is just perfect and the idea is well conveyed. Definitely a fun/heartfelt read. Nicely penned.

    P.s Nominated :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Blue Jay
      Thank you for lovely comments and glad you liked this. Also for nominating :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Stephanie Tangedahl

    Different but awesome

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Stephanie :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael though your work is wonderful in my eyes this is absolutely beautiful and I hope if this is literal that it all works out as you deserve some happiness.

    Em.x

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Em
      Such a lovely thing to say :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I love the idea of love being an accident, a collision of hearts ... sort of 'whoops!'
    A lovely write Michael x
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Kitty K
      Thank you glad you liked this :)

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is smashing sweet and clever, Michael!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Smashing Miss Mel thank you :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Phil

    nice one fella