Comments : Memoirs Of The Mist (part 1)

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Yes I know the punctuation is off a bit, a couple are errors and a few are deliberate

    "Because I'm a geek lol"

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Outstanding writing. You carried me with your words the entire time.

    • 8 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude, not sure where my head was going with this one but thoughts kept popping out so I kept writing

      Regards

      Craig

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Craig

    This is a brilliant piece from you fella.. 'For I am the mist' lovely ending

    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Michael,

      Wasn't sure how this one would go down as it kinda reads more like a narrative.

      It's good to know people kinda get it

      Regards

      Craig