Comments : Unending Nights

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is very good. The rhymes and clever half rhymes have not suffocated the rich imagery in any way which isn't always easy to achieve. Well done.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Beautiful imagery Sherry ... a lovely read :-)
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Sherry Caayupan

      Thanx, Kitty! Hope you enjoyed reading this! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Full of wonders. I loved 3rd stanza the most

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A well deserved nomination with beautiful visuals and agree with Ben the rhymes and half rhymes work brilliantly. Milly x