Comments : death on the battlefield

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Another visually interesting write. Some people won't take not interested for an answer. Well done with this-

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I agree with Brenda a visually interesting write. It can be quite difficult get rid of unwanted attention especially when it becomes obsession. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Risqué

      thank you for taking the time to read!

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I love the alternating format of this piece.

    • 6 years ago

      by Risqué

      Thank you, it's rather rare that I pay too much attention to presentation, but I found it fit well with this piece.