Comments : Endless

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Craig
    i would leave it as it.. This is honestly very thought provoking. the last line is such a powerful one.. often we can feel like our lives ar endless..

    Well done on this write.

    • 8 years ago

      by MoonMaiden

      Thank you for both comments, they're always taken into consideration & never unappreciated. (:

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Unique and powerful

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I think it's perfect as it is

  • 8 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    It's great as it is.. but how do you add more? I can't find either a Delete or an Edit option. Is it because I'm using my phone, & not a computer?
    Anyway, sorry, I digress! This has a complete catalogue of emotion, so I think adding more could lead to a 'long goodbye'. It's wonderful as it is x

    • 8 years ago

      by MoonMaiden

      Im using my phone. You have to go to the little person at the top right of the page. It has submit a poem/quote, favorites, etc.. Go to manage writings. Underneath each title you write you should have the option to edit, delete or feature.
      I hope thats what you were asking.. Lol.
      Also thank you so much. Ive decided to keep it as is (: