This is an excellent piece!

free verse,

I read this on the thread and was going to comment when it had finished.
This is a very interesting piece, with your perception of God. How you have written this is a deep thought provoking poem, which I enjoyed reading.

One small query is:

' some whisper I am a ring' I just wondered why it was not written without mentioning 'am a ring'
so ' some whisper I...

whereas 'GOD' and 'LOVE you did this, and this is purely out of my interest. But anyway a great write my friend :)

Michael

Extremely thought provoking but very profound

Free Verse, I loved this on Ben's contest and I love it now-well done-

Free Verse this is a unique piece and take on darkness. The inner acrostics are an integral part of this well written poem.
'I am nothing, but just an experience'.

A dark and twisty tale of the dark side of religion Shane ... love it! Thought provoking and uniquely structured. Well done x
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Thought provoking, clever piece with much depth. Liked the acrobatic elements woven through out. Glad it's been nominated. Milly x

This piece is wonderfully crafted and shows us so much of your unique and compelling writing. Great write.