Nams, another fine celebration write! You have described a life to a T. As with Ems, I love that you both were celebrating a life in their death-well done-

Wow. Your piece flows with the flow of life...seems effortless...the rhyming is sublime. It is calm and complete..straight out of a poets published book! Amazing

I really enjoyed reading this one. As it flows through each stage of life, it reminds me that life is short and to spend time with loved one while we can.

I loved the rhyming and the overall flow with this one. Well done

ah, love this! Especially the feeling that even the end of life is to be celebrated too. Lovely flow and a lovely read :-) x
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Love this piece name.
Well done on a fab write
Much love
Michael x :)

Nams, you showed us the journey of this life very well.
Flawless writing, from beginning till end.
Last two stanzas have taken this poem to another level.

Loved the ages and stages of life until we die and are celebrated and we all need to realise life is worth celebrating

This is beautiful. Happy to know it's been nominated.

*Left in a parent's possession
*as a child it seems far too slow

*Which continue as the child grows
Correction suggestion:
"which continue as they grow."

This is a wonderful tribute to the cycle of life and death. A somber but beautiful experience, highlighted by a very potent and truthful piece.

Love it dear,
S
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