oh you've done an extremely well here to portray what you thought. you caught what I was thinking perfectly, I just wasn't able to portray it so well. I really love this. nominated.

Such poems don't need any category, they only need admiration of other poets.
Cjt, you are a pearl and so are your poems.

Wow

You said this was inspired by Purvi's poem...yeah, you have even detailed the feeling of being a grain of sand...beautifully done. I'm glad that this is nominated!

This is really good. So much meaning in it :)

nicely done..i like this one, maybe we can make it a song

Amazing . Felt as though it was speaking to me

You did a great job! I could feel indie song vibes with this piece. I love it!

This poem was really good thanks for posting it