Comments : Missed call (Ben's thread)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, a near death experience is some scary stuff. I'm glad you are amongst the living and here on this site posting your poems. Here's to many, many more years this side of the dirt! Hugs-

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Still amongst the living Miss Brenda and thank you x :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this light hearted poem of woe. The imagery and tale was full of great visuals and kept me captivated all the way through. The rhyming and rhythm a pleasure to read. Had to nominate and add to my favourites. Milly x

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly lovely words as ever :)
      and a nomination from you and thank you too x

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I read on this the thread, Michael. I loved this, your story telling is great. And it's rhymed too! Glad that it's nominated.

    I cannot imagine the feeling of being on near death, but as Brenda said, I too am glad that you are among the living and writing beautiful poems for us to read!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel x

  • 8 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    So do you remember anything related to this experience?
    I mean people tell stories of heaven and all that, is that true?
    Did you see or experience anything unusual?

    I never met anyone in my life so far with such experience.
    That's why asking you.
    And about poem, you know you are genius, so a genius can do anything.
    You can write any format of poetry at its best without a doubt.
    This one, your near death experience everything perfect.

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you free verse (a genius, I hope I'm not that mad haha)

      The fall to coming round is blank to me, still today. I will say though, as I heard faint voice of my friend, saying "Mike is dead" I can only explain this as maybe I was for a few seconds. I think now, maybe senses pick up something while.... however I just don't know and wont until the old curtain swishes haha. Lovely comments :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Michael this is brilliant! That must have been scary as **** but you've made it so amusing! :-)
    Great write! x
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K,

      Yes there does need to be a little humour in this twisty tale :)x

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Love the rhyming Michael with great vocabulary. The story flows and its really interesting how the topic of near death is touched upon. Happy this is nominated!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark for nice comments :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Michael I had to read over. What experience and the way you described it. Amazing. Added to my favorite. All the very very

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar

      Not the best subject, but a true account :0x

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely fantastic story telling through rhyme

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your HM this week. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    Missed call (Ben's thread) by Michael points 7
    Michael weaves his tale so well with rhyme and added humour which is one thing I like about Michael's work he always has a real sense of how to attract his reader and keep them throughout the piece too. Glad you lived to tell the tale so well through your poetry and the title is fantastic and could be take two ways until reading the content itself.