EXCELLNT! Your humorous poetry really is top-notch, Milly; it has a wicked bite to it. The end of this had me in stitches.
I will nominate this later when my votes are recharged.

Ben

Thanks Milly, I enjoyed this piece. Very contemporary and relevant.

-IdTakeABulletForYou

What a marvelous rhyme and quick flow. The humor is outstanding!

The story you have crafted is amazing Milly. The imagery stands out most to me because each stanza paints a wonderful picture. The humor is not without notice either. Also the rhyming is perfect. Added to my favorites as well.

Oh Milly this is hilarious! I'm really laughing here! :-) everything about it is brilliant! I just love your humour :-) x
=^.^=

Miss Milly

You have a wonderful knack with witty and rhyme, (with a cheeky undertone :))
A lovely clever poem, and a the end just wrapped this up...brilliant, and I'm pleased this is nominated
Much love
Michael x

Dear Milly what a great piece and agree with Michael glad it was nominated.

Milly, what a wonderful write! Very clever wordage, entertaining all the way through-well done-

Definitely nailed it Milly with your honesty and wit

Hahaha...oh my, Milly! Yay this was clever and fun...and I loved this to pieces.

Yes, i did enjoy this. Fun to read, humorous & i liked the repetitive rhyme. Greatness (:

Very glad you got an HM Milly, congratulations and again, I enjoyed this thoroughly!

IdTakeABulletForYou