Nice poem and a perfect little slice of the power love has to build, destroy but then build again.

Take care and all the best,

Ben

all i could do is want to tear up. I don't know if you learned how to write that well or if it comes natural but all i can say is it is perfect. good job on writing this and i look forward to reading more of your poems

Perfect rhyming.. MB

A lovely tale of love, lost love and love again. Nice rhyming too. Milly x

Mahalia

I love this rhyming piece of first of all sadness, but then a happy ending, as you yearned for.
A wonderful gentle poem, which get my nomination :)
Much love
Michael

Such a lovely write. With the right person your heart will flourish and they guard it with their lives. Well done-

Aw beautiful! Glad it's nominated x
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The right person will cherish your heart. Beautiful write. All the best

Thank you all so much. I only post poems here cause a friend made me, but I had no idea people would actually enjoy them.