Comments : Butterfly Screams

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well rhymed with some really rather good imagery throughout.

    Well written and all the best,


    • 5 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Ben for input! Love your poems , I'm honored you took your time to read mine . Anyways thank you and best wishes to you as well :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brise, I read this as a woman looking at herself in the mirror and seeing the physical damage to her body caused by a violent partner?
    It's a powerful poem with sad but amazing imagery throughout. Even the title is amazing! Very thought provoking and brilliant! :-)