Comments : Breathe Me

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yay...well yes this was a little hot to handle. Nice flow, with beautiful subtle rhyming. Enjoyed it.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I did enjoy...and now I need a cold shower, lol.
    No, sensually done and well written.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Ben ! Always glad to hear from you :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I completely agree with Ben. You tried to cover it well, but the content was too hot.
    Once again, a very unique style of representing your emotions through poetry.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you :)