Mark..

Excellent piece !! Using nature to connect to human life.. well done..

Layout of this is awesome.. one small error.. 3rd stanza youve spelt lonliness wrong..

Mark,

reminiscing about love past, sadly makes for good poetry, and this is a wonderful piece from you fella
well done
Michael :)

Aw Mark, beautiful! Sad and reflective with wonderful analogies x
=^.^=

So glad to see it was nominated I was a little to late. All the best

Mark, such a beautifully sad write. So much longing for that lost mate, written with the beauty of the lone swan on the river. Hugs to you-

Ahh your beautiful language in here left me in deep silence as I feel line by line the sadness you are dealing with. The ending line...awww, it was the most hurtful of all.

Mark, you always touch our hearts with the beautiful imaginary you create.
And each poem of your is unique.
Completely different from the previous one.
It's hard for one to ignore such beautiful imagination of yours.
Loved it.

Just beautiful

Love this Mark my man, u do have a way with words. Wish I could express my poems more like this!!!! Great job