Comments : The Sides Of Ill Advice

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    So much I love about this that I cannot pinpoint really but the rhyming was on point and the metre seemed to be extremely smooth.

    "Maybe sleep on the outside,
    while inside, we lay awake."
    ^^
    these lines seemed to scream at me.

    All the best
    Em x

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em, glad you liked it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ma, I'll be back for a detailed comment, just the nomination for now. :-)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mel, much appreciated :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Wa! Maher
    Just loved this piece from you, a cleverly written poem
    and front page pending my friend
    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, my friend. I loved your win this week also. We learn from each other :)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SC - Holy Ef!!
    If this is what you can come out with late at night after everyone is asleep... Well KEEP DOING IT!!!

    This... well this is a great start to a Wednesday.. Seriously... This has so many hidden things or at least things i can take from it..
    I love it... And im so glad it is nominated.

    Well done SC!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you like it. Mostly, I'm glad there are things you can take from it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SO my net freaked out and posted the comment twice.. Sorry!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Lol all good dude

  • 8 years ago

    by Scott Cole

    Love this Maher!!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Mr Cole, glad you enjoyed it :)