Ahh, such beautiful captivating blue eyes they must be, to evoke such feelings within you. A beautiful, melting piece. I would only like to suggest wide open to come before gates in the last line of the second to the last stanza:
'It's like heaven's wide open gates had been pryed'

I loved the piece and nominated. :-)

Nicely expressed

this is so captivating, vivid an beautifully done through rhyme which I must say is flawless

Matt

lovely poem from you. Those old blue eyes, gets us every time :)
nice one fella
Michael :)