Comments : I Told The Birds (Song with recording)

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love this Maher! Beautiful, soaring and mysterious too! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, cat ma'am :)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Hrm.. SC love the layout. Is this a song?
    Its beautiful.. and mysterious.

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you like it. It is a song. Think of the dwarfs in The Hobbit singing that tune in Bilbo's house - that's more what it's like :)

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      That is even more beautiful!
      I more pictured amy lee / seether in broken, but you know :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Lol nah, Stay sounds a bit more like that though

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I absolutely love the mysterious feel to this... it leaves me asking myself many questions. May those birds forever keep your secret.. oh and might I add a flawless rhyme

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Em, glad you like it. I hope they'll keep it too :)

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    This is so wonderful, extremely well written. Dear Maher if there is only a handful of great poets in this site, you are for sure one of them.

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Your compliments are far beyond me, good Sir, but thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    A truly exquisite piece Mr Mayer
    wonderful imagery, with your name all through :)
    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Mr Michael. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    So glad I came across this piece of yours. Such elegant write. All the best

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, Dagmar :)