Comments : Fool

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    I like the way you handle world. All your stanzas are brimful of unique and complaisant angles that through them you see the world and you express yourself.

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      I appreciate your insight, ddavidd, and unique is what I aim for. Glad I'm succeeding :-)

      S

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Brilliant Stephen! I bet we all have a person in mind as we read this, we all know someone narcissistic like this.
    Your contempt for this person drips from the page ... great write! :-)
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Dealing with people is most definitely exhausting. I look forward to getting some time to myself a few months from now!

      Thanks for reading and commenting!
      S

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    S - Fantastic!!! I had to nominate :)

    We all know at least one person like this!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    I'd hate to be on the receiving end of this.....really gets the point across.

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      I don't even remember the name of the person who inspired it, but their bragging was insufferable. Glad it inspired a poem, at least.

      Thanks for reading/commenting!
      S

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I can't just choose one part of this I like because it's really really good.. the rhyme, the captivation and the resonation too.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Stephen, niiiiicccccceeeeee......I agree. I would not want to be on the receiving end of this write. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Have to agree with all the others don't want to be on the other end. Excellent write. All the best to you

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Haha S

    More 'fool' us for reading this!, but its worth feeling the fool to have just read it.
    Very good indeed :)
    Michael