Comments : Do You Know

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Time to let this one float I guess

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I'm happy this floated out although this is heart breaking esp the first line. I am sure you are coping well now and if you can be happy for her that means you do love her truly.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you Mel, but things ain't as grim as this poem seems. Circumstances have changed since its writing.

      Craig x

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This one is a couple of months old, I stumbled across it last night in drafts, things have changed somewhat since its writing. The future is much brighter.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A brave write. I know this is an older piece, but I can relate to it. Loving a person so much that letting them go makes logical sence. Thats all well and good, but love is not logical. It's born of emotional fire that continues to burn. Jealousy burns too, but the flames burn green.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Wow! Not sure how you found this one. I'd forgot all about it

      I remember where my mind was at when I wrote it. A lot has changed since then thankfully

      Thanks for your comments

      Craig

      Ps, in those times of jealousy the flames for me burn white