This is so relatable!

"counting every second
and even the ones
I have yet to run"

Yes! Why do we do this! Brilliant :-) x
=^.^=

I noticed this piece right after you posted it but I did not say anything about it to see if anyone else would recognize its brilliance.
This is a fantastic surrealistic venture in temporal cognition of universe. It reminds me of some of my own. Because as you perhaps know, I am obsessed with this subject, and of course its special correspondence.
I wrote a critical analysis of this poem, though I throw it away due to some personal concerns.
But as a member of this site I had to let you know that I've found a trace of ingenuity in this piece. I think the hamster simile is brilliant. And the last two stanzas are phenomenon.