Comments : Two Hearts Happenstance

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah William, I really get this. A brilliant write, with wonderful flow and rhyming and a real sense of 'what could have been'. :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I feel... its that pinning and the silence of what could have been
    makes this bond respectful, cherished and very deeply loved...

    So happy to see you writing again and this is simply simple
    and beautiful!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is stunningly beautiful yet so very sad

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this...there is a deeper feeling and the thoughts
    it takes the reader through brings the imagery alive...

    Hope to read more from you!