Comments : Wanderlust

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    It sounds good to me, Ren.
    A delicately written and formatted poem. Great to see a new post from you.

    All the best as ever and happy new year,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much, Ben :) I truly appreciate you. Take care and happy new year!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Purple Raven

    The imagery is beautiful and i love how the reader can get lost within the visions of the writer.

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by yogi73

    i love the natural imagery in this poem. The last stanza especially speaks to me, and adds a touch of magic to an already lovely poem

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much! :) I am glad you enjoyed it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful imagery that draws the reader in. You have captured imagery and feeling and it makes me want to run with the wind in my hair and sand beneath my feet. A lovely piece. Best wishes Milly x

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! I'm glad it could evoke that feeling within you :) I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Dear Cowgirl, this is a very refreshing write...like freedom for the soul. I can't help but imagine myself running free! Beautiful imagery! Great write here. <3

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Aww, thank you so so much beautiful Lady! <3 you're awesome!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Beautiful imaginary

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Ren, this really is lovely! Your visuals are stunning, makes me want to jump into that beautiful scene and get lost myself. Well done -

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much, Brenda!! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Lost One

    Sounds like a plan to me

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      :)